Reviewer: Gibraltar Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2009 18:54 Title: Part IV: Zero Moment - Chapter 2

This was a nice, laid back chapter.  Just the cadets, the ship, the wind and the water.  Oh, and the damnable bells, as Scotty points out.

That's what I love about this story.  You'd never know this ship was sailing the seas of the 23rd century.  Your descriptions are vivid and achingly precise, so much so that I feel I'm along for the ride. 

 

Author's Response: Thanks much, Sam! I wanted to touch on something timeless, and I'm glad it felt that way.