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Reviewer: Erin Moriarty Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 06:14 Title: Chapter Five

The tension in the first part of this chapter is palpable. This is one of those missions that all it would take is a minor power fluctuation and everything goes all to hell.

I really like all the detail that has gone into this plan and it's execution. Still, I have a feeling that something is going to gum up the works before long.

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2014 05:37 Title: Chapter Five

That was an interesting turn of events.  Is Tei really concerned about Grey and the success of the mission, or is she just setting him up?  Onward...

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