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Reviewer: Nerys Ghemor Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2009 05:11 Title: Part III: Righting Arm - Chapter 5

OH MY GOD, I CAN'T BELIEVE CORRY SAID HE HAD BEANS FOR LUNCH!!!!!! O_O

And it got even worse from there!

I just about fell out of my chair!!!!

I must say, though, you don't seem to like Security division very much, do ya? ;-)  I ask because a certain Makis Spirodopoulos is being quite loud right now, saying, "Hey, we're more than knuckle-dragging lugs!" (And he adds a big, loud :-P  just for you. ;-) )  Of course, I don't think he'd like the sassing, either...but the incompetence Security seems to be showing here?  Oooooooh, he'd be wanting to clean house BAD so that none of what's about to come could ever have transpired...

I STILL don't get how the cannonball didn't break Corry's foot, though...



Author's Response: Again, wearing combat boots, plus not actually having it dropped from any height, equals 'OWWWWWW!' and probably a bruise, but no broken bones. LOL! I think fine of security, but I don't think that the older is probably a shining example. Or that it was really that big a deal to them, meriting major investigations. ::laughs:: I don't doubt that if it was something more serious than a bunch of engineering cadets and a noise complaint, they would have put more effort into it.

Reviewer: Gibraltar Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2009 11:49 Title: Part III: Righting Arm - Chapter 5

The gang puts the finishing touches on the Lady Gray as the light at the end of the tunnel grows nearer.

The firing practice with the cannon was just hysterical!  Most especially their last minute dash to ditch the evidence and Corry's insistance that the situation was purely gastro-intestinal in nature. 

Great stuff!



Author's Response: I had actually cut the whole cannon-firing scene for flow and length, but one of my betas told me to put it back in. I'm glad you got a laugh!

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