Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 18:48 Title: 20 - Khazara, 2372

Ahhh - sweet! A capable romulan who is also a fairly deep one. This opens several really good storyline possibilities.

As a writer, you tend to play your cards close to the chest - nice slow buildup here and gradual reveal of character points for the romulans as well as a witches brew on the Agamemnon. 

Thanks!! rbs

Author's Response: I try to be conscious of pacing, sometimes, I know I go too slow. That's why I like starting stories off with a bang, similar to a TV show teaser, before we are setting into the slow build-up. It may be a bit formulaic but it seems to work most times.