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Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2012 03:14 Title: Act One

Geez - that was like The Three Stooges meet Joe Friday.  Hilarious, and effective.  I'm very much enjoying this light-hearted romp that doesn't take itself too seriously.  Onward and upward. ;-)



Author's Response: This has been a lot of fun to write, I am glad people are enjoying it and appreciating it. What better guys to rough up the hero than three Klingon mobsters?

Reviewer: Lil black dog Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2012 02:30 Title: Act One

You've certainly captured the feel of the PI movies from the 40's and 50's.  Nice start--I'm intrigued.  Off to read more now.

Reviewer: jespah Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 15:18 Title: Act One

"I lit it, took a puff and blew smoke into the air because the place needed more atmosphere." - Epic!

I also adored the coconuts line.

Ready for more!!



Author's Response: Thanks. When I heard the call for a Crimes Challenge, I instantly thought old detective movie. In addition to trek, I love old pulp novels, comics and film noir. I also thought this would give me a chance to do something different. the coconut line is borrowed from Phil Hartman...he said it in an SNL audition and I did it as tribute to him.

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