Date: 31 Jul 2020 18:57 Title: 12 - Agamemnon, 2372
So one of the queens survived? Interesting...
I am also amused by the presence of a Xendi bug on the crew.
The kerfuffle between DoSoto and Allenby is amusing and engaging - still awaiting its resolution..
Lots of nice buildup and an unexpected plot twist. Sweet!
Thanks!!! rbs
Author's Response: Much more on the Xenarth of the 24th century to come. I cannot recall if I decided to go with a Xindi insectoid as part of the crew before or after deciding on the Xenarth story. But it definitely adds an interesting aspect to it as the plot progresses.
Date: 08 Dec 2019 14:55 Title: 12 - Agamemnon, 2372
Oh man, guys, why are you still arguing even in Sickbay? I'm not surprised Bobby feels kinda guilty about it. I wish Tess would own some of her own responsibility in how she really was busy laying into him, though. I mean, yeah, the guy's acting like a jerk sometimes, but this was a pretty important bit of work they were doing and the continued grudge match wasn't exactly good for the operation.
Of course, then Bobby kinda refuses to let things go, too. -facepalms- Guys. Please. Enough.
Loving the descriptions of the bridge there from Maya's point of view. Very easy to visualize and makes plenty of tactical sense, too. "...and was lit by comfortable and glare-free white light." CeJay. CeJay. Did you just take a potshot at NuTrek? Because if you did, I need to buy you a drink should we ever meet up. XD
The light bantering there made me grin. Don't fly into it, indeed. AND THEN THAT HAIL AT THE END! OMG, I'm excited!
Author's Response: Bobby and Tess are a little bit like kids that need to be given a time-out, right? And as we'll find out soon, they're not the only ones not behaving at their best on this ship. Maya has a lot of work cut out for her. Not that she has time for these kind of shenanigans with what else is waiting in store.