Date: 12 Nov 2009 04:58 Title: Part III: Righting Arm - Chapter 3
Heh...I'm getting a kick out of Scotty thinking about the lack of common sense in security officers when he himself just showed what could be classed as a bit of a lack of common sense... ;-)
(Reminds me of that moment when he thought Berat was working himself into the ground while he'd done just as badly to himself. Not exactly a man for self-analysis, that's for sure! ;-) )
And that Harrison...maybe it's just my "Cardassian" instincts at play, but I don't trust someone who can switch their loyalties that quickly...
As for Maggie? What a jerk. That doesn't even begin to cover it.
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, absolutely, it is a running theme that Scotty is not good at measuring himself. Especially when it comes to being hard on himself mercilessly, and more forgiving or others, but in this case it does swing the other way. Then again, he lives, so I suppose he might have a point. LOL! Unlike many redshirts.
As for the others, we'll see. ::grins::
Date: 02 Jun 2009 04:04 Title: Part III: Righting Arm - Chapter 3
Geez.
First Scott and Corry become the Starfleet Engineering Mafia with their rooftop shenanigans, then it's covert recon on the bad boys club. As if that weren't bad enough, the girl that Corry's been pining for for ages is deep in the conspiracy.
It's good to see the dynamic duo back in action together, though. I'd rather have then united against a common enemy that at each other's throats again.
I've got the feeling their revenge will be served cold. Very cold, indeed.
Author's Response: ::grins:: It was a lot of fun writing a pair of young guys like this. I was their age at the time, and now that I look back, I remember being young and daring and a bit hot-headed. It's a good feeling. Thank you!