Reviews For Ohio
Reviewer: SLWalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 23:20 Title: Chapter 18
Date: 04 Jun 2013 23:20 Title: Chapter 18
I'm less sure what's going on with this chapter, but looking forward to finding out.
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That's more of a setup for later, as Avery is eventually hired.
Reviewer: Ln X Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 14:10 Title: Chapter 18
Date: 30 May 2013 14:10 Title: Chapter 18
Can't wait to see what that Manifesto message says! Although the bit with HD Avery was a little confusing and perhaps distracting. I mean if he works for the Temporal Integrity Commission and is protected by temporal shielding, why does he have an alternate self in this altered timeline? Really confusing you know all this temporal alterations!