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Reviewer: SLWalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 20:44 Title: Chapter 3

The quickie at the desk was pretty awesome, aside the whole cheating on the wife thing. XD But that office fraternization still happens in the distant future. The ending skeezed me out some, but I think that's because dude, brain surgery. Heck with the no. I hope they really are okay after all.

Author's Response:

It's how Boris (Xindi sloth, Klingon and human - so he's strong, paranoid and passionate) turns on a dime. Thanks!

Reviewer: trekfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 05:28 Title: Chapter 3

I’m worried about all these new recruits. Why is the Temporal Integrity Commission hiring so many people? What happened to all the previous people who held their jobs? I feel like something big has gone down, some guys have gone MIA or KIA, and the commission is keeping things on the down low. Bernstein isn’t the only new recruit, which is good I guess. She can find other newbies, make some new friends, and allow herself some time to settle in. But the sheer number of new recruits makes me think that something bad has happened before.

But I could be wrong. I mean, the two doctors are really into one another (so much so that they’re going to sneak quickies at work and then start doing it while their boss is in the room? Wow, they really have the hots for one another) and they don’t seem to be too concerned about the surgeries. I’m glad the patients are though because somethings should be scary, no matter what year it is. I hate hospitals and surgeries, I despite them, and I’m glad that there is some of that here. Maybe not hatred, but def worry.

Now, I’m wondering where all this is leading too. Are these new recruits gonna play a big role in the future? I’m not sure. But I hope we get to see more of Crystal. I remember her from before. She was fun.



Author's Response:

Yes, Crystal is here, and you'll see two of the three character I've put up for the Round Robin.

The hirings are actually because the Commission just got permission to bring in more people - hours have been jiggered, and now they can do some hiring. But it's also for, well, you'll see.

Reviewer: Ln X Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 11:46 Title: Chapter 3

So that's why Carmen hired Marisol, one part for her talent as a doctor and the other part for certain... perks...

These temporal agents and their senior staff sure are strange people!

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