Reviews For The First Ones
Reviewer: RobertScorpio Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2013 04:29 Title: Chapter 5
Date: 31 Jan 2013 04:29 Title: Chapter 5
Great sequence LN X...You nailed the dialog...and yes, I am revving up a new chapter. But I am re-reading it all and eventually, when I am done...I will continue!!!
Reviewer: RobertScorpio Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 06:52 Title: Chapter 5
Date: 01 Apr 2012 06:52 Title: Chapter 5
A lot happening in this issue...and you have done a great job moving the story along....I love the intrigue that is happnening in this story!!!