Reviews For The First Ones
Reviewer: RobertScorpio Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2013 03:15 Title: Chapter 1
Date: 10 Jan 2013 03:15 Title: Chapter 1
Wow...I just re-read this TREKFAN. You really nailed the menacing mood and the dialog PERFECT! As I get set to add a new chapter to this story, I am going to re-read them all. I want to commend you again for getting this story off to a great start!!!
Reviewer: Ln X Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 20:17 Title: Chapter 1
Date: 01 Apr 2012 20:17 Title: Chapter 1
I dig the sixth chapter, adds a lot more complexity to these androids! Wonder what will happen to Beverly?
Author's Response: Thanks...I am digging what Jespah just wrote...I really like this story!!!
Reviewer: RobertScorpio Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2012 14:19 Title: Chapter 1
Date: 15 Mar 2012 14:19 Title: Chapter 1
Covers look great...
Reviewer: Jason Thompson-Hauck Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2012 23:22 Title: Chapter 1
Date: 14 Mar 2012 23:22 Title: Chapter 1
never mind, figured it out.
Reviewer: Jason Thompson-Hauck Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2012 20:40 Title: Chapter 1
Date: 14 Mar 2012 20:40 Title: Chapter 1
my editing / graphiccs won't stick.