Date: 28 May 2013 11:46 Title: Chapter 12
This story is starting to develop in all kinds of interesting directions and I'm getting those DS9 vibes here! You've given a sense of a much bigger picture here and I will be very interested in how you tie the various elements together. But one thing is for certain, you have definitely got me hooked to this story!
Date: 10 Nov 2009 18:21 Title: Chapter 12
Man, I know it's easy for me because my stories predispose me to do so--but as much of a total jerk as that Cardassian commander was, I found myself feeling sorry for him, winding up that way. Even if he was a jerk...maybe he had family that wasn't, and for them to find out it all ended this way, dumped out unceremoniously on some Federation colony world without a proper funeral or even a semblance of respect--very sad.
The twist in the plot--I heartily approve! I can't wait to see if they catch the mole in their crew, and how they uncover the actions of the enemy. Though one that can do all of these things is very frightening indeed...
Date: 23 Apr 2009 23:09 Title: Chapter 12
Jeekers! The political intrigue ramps up even further and the mystery on the ground doesn't top at the changing grass colour [a detail I love]. If S31 had dealings with this then there's poltical minefield and trouble written all over just as the intergalactic politics appears to go nova.
Date: 01 Apr 2009 17:23 Title: Chapter 12
Woot! Intrigue! Well-written intrigue, too; you bring up a whole lot of interesting points with it, and make your reader cast about trying to grasp what's going on. Who could be the mole, who could have really engineered the virus, who's beaming the bodies down. Fascinating!