[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2021 14:10 Title: Conscience of the King
Interesting storytelling - really jumping through the life and decisions of Lar'ragos. I'm enjoying the details culled from STV - the trabe, the kazon.
Thanks!! rbs
Author's Response:
I'm happy you're enjoying the tale. Yes, Lar'ragos has a long journey from the Delta Quadrant to the Alpha, filled with many obstacles and foes. He's one of the main characters in my Gibraltar series.
Date: 18 Oct 2009 21:00 Title: Conscience of the King
An ominous note ending with Lar'ragos' first military career. He is going to other places. I like that he found his conscience here when it came to bombing children. There's a degree to which a character can be redeemed. Mind with the character of Pava and your writing skill I dare say you could/may yet do it and even pull it off.
Now I imagine that escaping the Hekosian army is going to come with a certain payback and trouble. I wonder how exactly Pava might deal with that?
Touching that he almost wanted to embrace his death squad to account for his sins and to meet his family again.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yes, there was a part of Lar'ragos who was willing to 'cash in' at that very moment and spare himself an especially long lifetime of guilt and bad memories.
Date: 24 Jul 2009 21:38 Title: Conscience of the King
Well, well, so that's why he left the Empire! Really cool idea and the first glimmers of a conscience, too.
Date: 28 Feb 2009 01:49 Title: Conscience of the King
I don't remember if I commented on this before; I remember reading it, though. I was glad that Pava did side to the good in this case, even if it wasn't even remotely an easy decision to do so. And even if it ended his first career.