[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2021 23:35 Title: Chapter 10
Superb character development with both Remirez and Sandhurst - growing pains...
I enjoyed Pava's speech - the bit about the swagger.
Also a very believable description of the collision of the cardassioan and Star Fleet cruisers.
Thanks!! rbs
Author's Response:
Yes, in a perfect world Sandhurst & Ramirez would have had time and opportunity to get to know one another properly, but in this scenario they've had to collide abruptly to shear off their rough edges.
Date: 29 Sep 2014 01:53 Title: Chapter 10
Oh, the unenviable clean up process. Still, it seems as though through all this, Ramirez and Sandhurst have reached somewhat of an improved-- albeit tenuously so-- relationship.
At least, they have until Ramirez comes across the red shirt he has with her name embroidered upon it.
Date: 29 May 2012 01:50 Title: Chapter 10
Hmm... Sandhurst pretending to be something he is not by actively engaging with his injured subordinates. Lar'ragos was right about captain's keeping a cool head and trying to sell it to the crew that everything will be alright. But I think Sandhurst should find his own style of command and just have more faith in his abilities; bonding with the crew can come later.
Author's Response:
Sandhurst's trying to find his own command persona under less-than-ideal circumstances, to be sure. Here's hoping he lives long enough to settle into one. ;-)
Date: 24 Jul 2010 05:22 Title: Chapter 10
"No one really knows how much of the aura of command is pure theater until they’re sitting in the big chair.” - great quote.
It's nice the Sandhurst recognizes Ramirez' hard work and sacrifice (esp. after that!). Nice little character exchange here.
Author's Response:
I’m glad you liked the quote. It’s one of the more sensible things Lar’ragos has ever said.
Sandhurst and Ramirez may still not be getting along at this point, but they’ve at least retreated to neutral corners for the time being. We’ll see how long the detent lasts for.
Date: 06 Dec 2009 08:39 Title: Chapter 10
Stunning! I've really been drawn into this adventure and the fact that this is a crew and ship with fallibilities is gripping.
As a first time ship commander, Sandhurst is learning the lessons of command the hard way. The obviously deep friendship with Lar'ragos is doubtless the anchor he so badly needs right now.
And poor Ramirez! Frying pan and fire springs to mind!
The story continues to be beautifully executed with character interplay and action paced perfectly to my tastes!
Oh how my writing is suffering simply because I can't drag myself away from this! Curse you Sam! :)
Author's Response:
I am pleased you're enthralled with the story, but as I'm presently awaiting the latest chapters of your tale I've apparently sabotaged myself with my own work! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2009 15:45 Title: Chapter 10
Another great chapter! I loved the way you dealt with the aftermath here, good to get this glimpse into the thoughts of both Ramirez and Sandhurst. You showed the reactions of the crew to what had just happened in a fantastic way.
Loving this!
Author's Response:
Yes, who knew winning a battle could be such an angsty experience? ; ) But, as Sandhurst is now wondering... now what do they do?
Date: 23 Aug 2009 01:28 Title: Chapter 10
Pava's a good friend for Sandhurst, keeping him accountable. Every captain needs a friend like that.
I'm glad Ramirez is all right -- I was nervous for her when she got shoved into an escape pod with a head injury.
Date: 12 Aug 2009 03:48 Title: Chapter 10
Pava's years of experience really show here. Sandhurst is lucky to have him on his crew.
The description of the ecological devastation of the Breen attack was poignant, serving to highlight what the unfortunate survivors will be facing in the months to come, with our without relief aid.
Author's Response:
Pava, when in the right frame of mind, can be an excellent advisor and sounding board.
Lakesh is dying a slow death, and will likely experience the equivalent of a nuclear winter without some kind of environmental intervention.