Date: 16 Jul 2013 23:04 Title: Chapter Two - Part Three
Good that the relations with the doctor are starting to normalize, too. Beth needs her crew, and they have got to get along. I imagine there is an adjustment period for all concerned.
Date: 25 Oct 2011 13:35 Title: Chapter Two - Part Three
Those ghosts sound very much like Jem'Hadar, though th smell and "not killing nature" is not something I usually associate with Jem'Hadar. I wonder where it's all going... :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2010 09:42 Title: Chapter Two - Part Three
Hi! Sorry for the delay, I hope to be able to catch up on some more of this over the next few days.
Wow, an interesting chapter here. I'm intrigued by the apparent timing of these attacks and the way they correspond to important treaties. Of course, that begs the same question as Riker - why now?
The interaction between Beth and the doctor was well done, especially when he is trying to find out whether she has sensed his less professional thoughts about her!
I already like the two captains of the other ships, and look forward to seeing how they will play together.
Excellent work, really well written!
Date: 16 Nov 2009 23:51 Title: Chapter Two - Part Three
More mystery. Keeping us in the dark so far and it works to keep me wondering and reading. And we get to learn a little more of the doctor. His marriage does sound like it was a little ill-conceived and marks him as being more than what we have expected so far. Shall be interesting to see more of him.