[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2012 00:21 Title: Chapter 19
Hell yeah, this story is coming together, and it took a while but your really stringing the pieces together now. Things have got a faster pace and I definitely like where this is going. Even more so giving the time you've spent on these characters (especially the secondary ones like Lili and Hayes [though to you they could be primary ones, I don't know]). These are characters I actually care about, so you've done a good job of sucking me in. Nice little explanation about those Denobulan coins!
Author's Response:
Oh yay!
Lili and Doug are my main original characters for this series. I'm glad they are people who are meaningful to you.
And the coins - slowly, slowly, the loaded guns that were tossed on the table at the start of the story are beginning to fire.
Date: 05 Dec 2011 09:44 Title: Chapter 19
I wonder if the away team is going to crash the big Calafan party. And totally ruin it. Not that I would pity the Calafans and their mean plans of using a innocent person for their political gains.
Author's Response:
We have two very different away teams (three, really, because there are two separate teams in the Prime Universe), all converging on the ceremony and, perhaps, somewhere else ....
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 06:36 Title: Chapter 19
Things are heating up, can't to see how it all plays out. Awesome build up and suspense Jes. Thank you
Author's Response:
It's a struggle to know how much to reveal. Glad that keeping a few veils on is a good thing!