Reviewer: Ln X Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 22:06 Title: Chapter 9

Oh my God! You mean there is an enemy more powerful than the Del'Vreer? trekfan, you've outdone yourself! Beating back the Del'Vreer seems impossible enough but defeating an enemy more powerful than them? I don't see it and I fear you have created an ultimate enemy so powerful how could it be defeated? Perhaps with celestial intervention? Or maybe the Q or the Prophets can render their assistance?

Aside from creating an enemy who seems impossible to defeat, and thus seemingly impossible to wrap up this story, that was a good scene and the first time I got a sense of humanity in Maria. Finally she showed some remorse, just a little bit!

But I do find Maria's logic very messed up. How does destroying Hank prepare him for this telepathic attack from this enemy? Surely there can be a better way to raise his defences? Are this enemy so brutal that nothing can prepare Hank for this, unless he has experienced true pain, despair, loss, anguish and humiliation? If that is so then that is really really messed up!