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Reviewer: Ln X Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 21:49 Title: Chapter 8

I can understand Chris being really angry about his two death brothers, but for that to manifest instead into such strong anger towards Nick and Mark... I'm surprised Chris past the psychological tests Starfleet Academy performs on cadets to determine their mental stability. I worry for Chris because when he gets really angry he becomes violent, as evidenced by the bottle he threw at his brother, so if he ever married Madison... Well, I would really worry for her if Chris got into a real mood. He's the sort of person whom abusive husbands are made of.

Talking about abuse, Hank seems to be growing ever more paranoid about Maria, for good reason though, but he's showing some grit by attending this meeting and having to disclose some very distressing things as part of Hank showing the others his piece of the puzzle.

I'm looking forward in the next chapter to seeing how this puzzle fits together!

Reviewer: Nerys Ghemor Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 01:58 Title: Chapter 8

OK...I don't like Chris Walker, but I DID like this exchange:

"What the hell was that?"

"A bad miss."

That made me laugh.

As to Winsor...he'd better have himself checked for nanites.  And Hank...why can't they get rid of his?

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