Date: 19 Aug 2013 02:19 Title: Chapter 7
"I don't now," Paul said with conviction. "I feel...dirty. Like we were just part of something that shouldn't have happened."
I think Paul surmizes the entire picture here with that statement. How sad after his happy opening. Seems Maria stayed true to her word but again her torture of Hank colours what her motivations are. She's made it very hard to believe her even if acts seem to prove her truth.
This is turning into a hell of a puzzle. To trust her or not?
Date: 30 May 2013 21:38 Title: Chapter 7
So Maria kept her word and that only adds to her mystery. She has the most weirdest moral code ever. So she tortures Hank to near insanity just she can pretend to be following the evil schemes of the Del'Vreer. And then she somehow gets away and arrives on the Pearl to restore the timeline!?! Paul is right here, something does not add up. If Maria was torturing Hank for the greater good then Hank would have sensed some sort of guilt or remorse from her, but he didn't. Unless those dreams were Maria's way of 'helping' Hank. I mean Maria has shown no remorse and if she really cares about inferior lifeforms you would think she would do something to express her regret and guilt over what she did to Hank.
Very strange indeed...
Date: 03 Apr 2011 04:29 Title: Chapter 7
Maybe it shows how suspicious I am--that I would have shot and killed Maria as soon as she was done "healing" Barash (assuming that's what she actually did as opposed to programming Barash in some fashion), while she was weak.
Actually, I would've shot her before that.
Author's Response:
LOL. The thought had crossed my mind, trust me.
More to come for sure. Thanks for the review. :)