Date: 26 Jun 2013 23:03 Title: Inspiration
Not sure what I can say that is truly new.
I enjoy this book. The Era of the Enterprise-G is rich and alive. You've caught existing character voices well and I can believe in Beth as Will/Deanna Daughter.
I like the original aliens and the black sheep sister threat.
The mixing of history interlude and 'G' Era, make it an easy read with the reveal about past actions helping. Hope to see more of the old Enterprise and titan crews in your other stories.
Yes forward, forever forward!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review FalseBill! I appreciate the feedback very much and yes, I'm currently working on Book Two.
Date: 15 Dec 2009 19:45 Title: Inspiration
Oh I imagine it was a bit of an adventure.alright. A sort of Curious George in space! Hee hee.
Date: 15 Dec 2009 19:43 Title: Inspiration
Well your personal point must have fed the emotional thrust of this scene - simple and understated but very powerful Teri. And yes, although ENT has many detractors it really did forge ahead in its attempt to flesh out more of the species we held already dear to our hearts. And it has to be said, I am considering off some ENT love I've seen on OS and from reading your character of Brint introducing an Andorian as captain to my next project - failing that I need one at least on the Kestrel!
Date: 29 Nov 2009 16:29 Title: Inspiration
Now I'm intrigued as to what happens! Hmmm ... thinking Riker might be in the kitchen at least as you've shown him to be inclined to cook, but who else? *Headscratches*
Author's Response: You'll see. :D
Date: 20 May 2009 01:43 Title: Inspiration
I love this story. The daughter of Riker and Troi commanding the Enterprise, priceless.
Would love to see a sequel someday.
Date: 26 Feb 2009 20:02 Title: Inspiration
This is a fanastic story and one that all will love. It explores a great family and reaches into the depth's of Trek to pull out a great adventure.
Author's Response: Thank you so much trekfan!
Date: 25 Feb 2009 19:53 Title: Inspiration
This story is nothing short of epic.
The care that is taken here with the characters from TNG that we've come to know and love is obvious. They sound and act just as they should, given the passage of time and the events that they've survived along the way.
Elizabeth Riker is a character that could have easily become a caricature. She's a born starship captain, a prodigy from a Starfleet family made all the stronger for the hell she was subjected to at Starfleet Academy.
However, Terilynn makes Beth a flawed, feeling person rife with doubts and her own failings. Beth has survived a long and protracted war with a new enemy, and bears the scars from those desperate engagements. She's lost friends and comrades, which affects how she relates to those around her and those under her command.
The technique of presenting the story in a linear fashion that includes multiple flashbacks to crucial past events helps the reader to get a definitive view of the characters and those experiences that have made them who they are in the present. It's an effective tool, and works very well here.
The dialogue is phenomenal, at points awkward, hurtful, and impassioned as these characters struggle against the obstacles set before them, occasionally bruising each other in the process. Especially amusing is the strong bonds and witty repartee between the Cat captains. I absolutely loved their unique group motto!
Beth's unique relationship with Q is a standout point in her character. Of all those the mischievous quasi-deity has tormented, Beth understands him best, and can actually converse with Q without sounding like a broken record endless repeating, 'Why are you here?' and 'Get off my ship!' Her rapport with Q is more like that of Janeway than Picard, Sisko, or Will Riker. When Q speaks, she actually listens.
The battle scenes in the story are action-packed, well-paced, and thrilling in their intensity. It's not often one finds a fanfic author who can master both the interpersonal relationships and dialogue of their characters, as well as pull off amazing combat scenes. Terilynn is the full meal deal.
I'm glad I took my time to savor this story, because I ultimately found it fulfilling on a number of levels.
I would highly recommend readers make the investment in reading this powerful, complex story.
Author's Response: You honor me in ways I cannot express. Thank you.