Date: 01 Jul 2013 06:59 Title: Part I: Balancing Equations - Chapter 2
The banter between these two is just a joy to read. Absolutely adorable.
I love Corry's mom.
Also, the depth you put into the descriptive bits makes South Bristol and the Corrigans' home feel like additional characters in the story.
Beautiful stuff.
Date: 13 Jul 2012 18:30 Title: Part I: Balancing Equations - Chapter 2
Excellent as always. I especially like the way that Scotty's infatuation with Rachel parallels the later nature of his love life (the brief and presumably ultimately unsuccessful infatuations with Carolyn Palamas and Mira Romaine). Like other reviewers, I also feel I must point out the unusual and refreshing inclusion of the grace before dinner.
Author's Response: Hee! I'm so glad you caught that! Scotty is no genius at romance, clearly; he falls hard, fast and into a state of total stupidity for awhile, almost invariably gets utterly rejected and it's little wonder the man's essentially a lifelong bachelor. Thanks so much for the comment!