Reviewer: Gibraltar Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2010 11:37 Title: Chapter 7

Janeway and Chakotay’s conversation in the brig cell was a nice coda to this tale.  The captain could not ignore the heroism of her first officer’s actions, but neither could she turn a blind eye to the unsavory deeds that led to his successful rescue of the crew.  Fifteen days in the brig and a commutation of the remainder of his sentence was a good compromise for her, given their circumstances.

Hopefully this situation has cemented in Janeway’s mind Chakotay’s loyalty and his commitment to the lives and safety of the crew.

An excellent story with mystery, drama, and some terrific character moments.  Well done!

Author's Response: Gibralter, I'm astonished - after going to your pages and seeing how many award-winning stories are posted there - and so grateful for your comments! Could you please recommend to me which of yours I should begin reading? It's confusing to begin in the middle of a series. Thanks for your help - and thanks for your comments!