Reviewer: Gibraltar Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 08:59 Title: Chapter 3

So there is danger close, but Chakotay will have to work to dig deeper in order to discover the exact source of the threat to his ship and crew.  I'm waiting with baited breath for the other shoe to drop.

Continued excellence.  I appreciate the wonderfully natural flow of your dialogue.  You've really captured Chakotay in this scene. :-)