Date: 15 May 2013 03:04 Title: Chapter 16
Oh snap. Big chapter in a couple of ways but first I'd like to say "Was up!" to Ianto who has been sorely missed. It's nice to see him back and running, and good to see him come to the defense of Kalara. She's his bud and she's innocent ... I anticipate he'll find that out. His demonstration with his emitter was very effective and got the point across quite clearly.
But Prin seems to have bigger things to deal with. The power struggle seems to have turned into the beginnings of a blood bath and I can't tell what's going to happen other than the Redemption is in some deep trouble.
The shaken reactions of the bridge crew were well done and I enjoyed the pacing in this chapter, filled with the right amount of action and debate (internal and external).
Date: 23 Feb 2011 14:48 Title: Chapter 16
Well things are getting worse by the moment here. This building terrifically to a climax. You do a super job of setting all the pieces in place and then knocking them down. Per chance you like to do so with dominoes? But seriously, nice plot crafting, staging everything and timing it all to such dramatic beats.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2010 11:20 Title: Chapter 16
Prin has a pragmatic sense and isn't so easily swayed by emotion as Ba'el allows himself to be. Kudos to her for seeing something wrong within Kalara's alleged actions, and for moving to speak with someone acting as the Klingon's advocate.
And now, things are suddenly, inexplicably worse... and Prin must decide to fight, flee, or surrender, without knowing which action might lead to a more successful conclusion to this vital mission.
And they say the captain's job is tough! 