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Reviewer: Mistral Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2013 10:09 Title: Chapter 4

ok. I see where you are going. Now what?

Reviewer: Gul Rejal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 12:08 Title: Chapter 4

I must admit that I thought of the episode "Parallels" with Worf when still reading chapter one, part two. As soon as it was clear that two Chakotays were displayed, it became clear that it wasn't just one in some wrong place.

It had to be though for the one who lost Kathryn to have that reminder of what he had lost, but I wonder if it brought him some relief that there was a reality, in which she was still alive, that somewhere there in space-time continuum, she was fine and happy.

It's a shame that the story wasn't finished, but it seems like they found a solution and both "teams" were going to go with it. Though, I don't know if some complications could not happen. I hope that some day you'd return to this story and post the continuation or the "grand finale."

Reviewer: Mistral Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 19:58 Title: Chapter 4

Fascinating game of parallels so far!

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