Date: 21 Jul 2010 04:45 Title: Chapter 2
Ahh, OK...we've got 2 Chakotays that have switched places. I can't wait to see if their doctors are able to discover what's going on.
I also wonder how they'll get back, if there's no anomaly and also no VISOR to facilitate the switch...?
Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much for the review :-) Everything will be explained in the coming chapters, I hope you'll like them too :-P
Date: 19 Jul 2010 20:05 Title: Chapter 2
Woah! The Counsellor for Chakotay B believes him and the counsellor for Chakotay A is a complete prig!
So we are getting to see more differences here and quite a few there seems to be. But how deep are they in terms of the galaxy? How did Janeway die in Chakotay B's universe and why? And why is the counsellor with Chakotay B [I need better tags to differentiate or else I'm going to get very confused in my own review] so willing to belive somehting is wrong? Perhaps she is El Aurian like Guinan. Again, lots of mysteries here and no answers as yet. Liking the two handed approach to things and of course the impacts for both Chakotays.
Validated this chpater though there were formatting issues different from the first chapter - added in the line spaces between paragrpahs to make it more readable. Again, good stuff.
Author's Response: Thank you :-) I'm glad you like it. I don't remember if I give the explanation for KJ's death later on, but the universe in which she is dead is based on the Pocket Books verse, where she died after being assimilated by some big bad Borg supercube. I didn't like that, so I made my own universe in which things are much better for her and Chakotay :-) Can you tell me about the formatting issues, maybe I can fix them before I post the next chapter?