Reviewer: Ln X Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 22:26 Title: Chapter 3

I like where this story is going so far, even though I have to back track to follow the plot. Man this plot is fast moving and detailed! I like that brief scene with Neeley and that male officer, especially the 'mentally undressing her down' part. Morcheeba have a song called Undress Me Now, really good, and that song sprung to mind!

Author's Response: I hadn't really considered, although it is something of a hint of the sexual tension between her and Morrison, but she doesn't quite take kindly to a younger lower ranking male officer looking at her in that way.