Date: 14 May 2013 19:47 Title: Chapter 8
Well, seems that things are getting interesting all over the ship. No lack of excitement. Benjamani is a piece of work and I love how Sarine refers to her as a "bitch" even in his narration because she really is one. Totally loved how Prin came to his rescue and let Sarine get off the bridge ... that's a true friend.
The battle between Turner and Sarine in the FSD was quite fun to read. Loved the way the two of them danced with each other, so to speak, and afterwards how Sarine just poured his heart out to her.
And then Turner goes in for the kiss and the two are together, yay! It's been building for awhile, so it was nice for them to be able to meet in that way. Have to say, I'm glad Turner isn't forcing things to get serious fast. She's a keeper.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 00:43 Title: Chapter 8
Some helpful advice from Turner. Sarine is lucky enough to have Turner and Prin there to help him. I guess not following this on TrekBBS I'm missing out on any shipper wars but there's a lot of chemistry between Bael and Prin, and Bael and Turner. It could all work out in different ways. Yes Benjamini hopes to control and keep Sarine off balance so playing her at her own game will be fun to see.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2010 16:55 Title: Chapter 8
Glad to see Prin and Bay can have it out and forgive each other. I like their friendship and I think they have nice chemistry together. In fact, I'm a bit of a shipper for the two of them ... but then you drop Turner on us. I know she and Bay have had their little eye contact flirtation thing going ... but here she listens and he opens up and we get the nice kiss. I like Turner, I do. She seems great. (I just like Prin a little bit more.) It's nice to see Bay get a chance to breathe and do something he enjoys with someone who makes him feel good. Even if it's not Prin. Sigh.
Maybe I'm slow to catch on or have forgotten something from Volume 2, but these last chapters have had me wondering who Benjamani is really working for. Something about her reactions on the bridge just now seemed off to me, and then there's the way she seems to want Bay to be at his worst ... if she's up to something, I wonder if Kalara will be the one to catch on.
Great stuff, Joel. I'm still thoroughly enjoying your characters and universe. Keep up the good work!