Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2021 12:53 Title: 025 - "Nothing Like A Trip Into The Countryside."

Nice detail about the Federation logo glowing in the night skyline. Touches like that bring a story visually to life. Also enjoying the inclusion of Gavin's family.

Also good character exposition through conversation. That is often really tricky and I've seen attempts that completely killed the narrative flow and were totally not the way people gossip. The moment between Gavin and Hot Rod was handled well.

Also very much liking Hot Rod's closing response about only being a driver.

Thanks!! rbs