Date: 23 Nov 2009 06:04 Title: Lunar One
Geez, where to begin with this wonderful chapter?
Once again you show the reader the stark contrasts between the shabby, dilapidated existence planet-side on Earth and the clean, refined corporate lifestyle available on Lunar One. Ginny’s sensual, almost erotic ravaging of a ‘simple’ orange really underscores how such things have become delicacies on an Earth suffering in the throes of a global nuclear winter.
Ginny’s scene with Johannesen was simply terrific, and the hug-ultimatum made me laugh while being genuinely touching as well. I would imagine people during this period probably rarely if ever see a simple, honest gesture of pure gratitude like that.
Li’s agoraphobia rings especially true, given the limitless open horizon of the airless moon.
And the offered modifications and upgrades to the Molly Magee must come with a hidden price. Nobody does anything for free, most especially in this dark chapter of Earth’s history. Henderson and Sledge are correct to be wary of this situation.
Author's Response: Ginny is a genuinely kind person who has never had much to be grateful for in her life. It makes the little things all the more important, I think.
Sam and Li both got bitten by the agoraphobic bug. I'm not agoraphobic at all, but I have to admit that photos taken from the lunar landings and even movies that realistically portray that look make me uncomfortable in some primitive part of my brain. I can't imagine how much worse it would be if one were from a very enclosed environment. It was another detail that spontaneously arose from some place in the characters' psyches unplanned.
You're right. They are correct to be wary of the situation. Obviously, they don't know how correct yet. Thank you for the review!
Date: 29 Oct 2009 19:27 Title: Lunar One
They finally got there-and without blowing up. I loved Ginny's reactions to the luxuries at RenCorp. Totally believable, given her background and circumstances.
Author's Response: Yep, no booms. Yet. :D I'm glad you liked her reactions. She was fun to write for this time. It even made me appreciative of the little things I often take for granted, like clean water or a piece of fresh fruit. A lot of people on this planet don't have access to either. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2009 11:42 Title: Lunar One
This chapter was so worth the wait. The descriptions were so spot on. The low-gravity environment, the fear of open spaces after being cooped up so long, the reactions to the fruit and water ... I also liked Ginny's interaction with Eric. Most people would probably let pride get in the way of a demonstration like that. It's nice to see someone put herself out there, and that Eric didn't totally reject her gesture. I did make me wonder -- when was the last time Eric was hugged? And poor Li. Looks like she's not been forgiven yet. Something tells me Eric has a long memory for that kind of thing, too.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was a little bit of a struggle in coming. I feel a little rusty after having to take a lengthy break thanks to work and life, but writing for Ginny helped me find the groove again. Every time I think I've found the limit to her courage or willingness to put herself out there, she surprises me. Eric isn't an easy person to approach at all. I think for her the gratitude overwhelmed any trepidation.
Has he ever been hugged? LOL Probably, but honestly, I can't think of too many people who'd be willing. Noooo, he does not quickly forget. As for forgiveness, well...that will just have to remain to be seen. Thanks for the review!