Date: 02 Jul 2013 07:17 Title: Chapter 25
Ah geez. Just when they have enough problems, the Q show up. Nothing like a bunch of omnipotent foreshadowing to pretty much ruin an Icheb's day, is there?
Date: 04 Jun 2012 23:00 Title: Chapter 25
Whenever Q shows up it is a bad omen, I guess Icheb is going to be in a very nasty situation some chapters away...
Date: 06 Jul 2010 20:37 Title: Chapter 25
Interesting visit from Q and Q-Junior. The narrative nicely illustrates that the Q's conception of time is just as confusing as the Prophets'
Author's Response:
Hehe, it is, isn't it? Thanks for reading and continuing to review. :) I expect Q and son will be making occasional appearances in this series. After all, like Q said, every time he turns his back for a second, Junior runs off to find his friend.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 18:59 Title: Chapter 25
Dear me...bad things a brewing when Q comes near. Especially 2 Qs...
Author's Response:
Definitely unwelcome visitors! Thanks for the review.
Date: 01 Oct 2009 21:39 Title: Chapter 25
“Q?” he mouthed silently ... “That can’t be good.”
No that can't be good! For Icheb and co. at least. For us the readers? Oh yes! Hee hee. With so much going on in this story - one would suspect that adding the Q to it would overwhelm it. But not so. It was handled very well and adds an intriguing new element. Now my suspicions that things would go wrong [well it is a story!] are confirmed with q joining the fray and wanting to warn Icheb. The fact Q doesn't want to warn means to say it ain;t no trivial matter.
And from John's reaction and the comments made about Maren, I'm eager to know what transpired the last time round! Hee hee.
Before the appearance of the Q, I was going to be commenting on the wonderful introspection we catch going in inside Icheb's mind. It is great to see this insight. He realises his mistakes but that's no guarantee that he will not make the smae or more in the future.
I also like q tackling Q about the double standards he shows. If it were Jean-Luc or Janeway, would Q think differently? Hmmm. Which sadly means for Icheb that he is to q what Picard/Janeway were for Q! That's going to mean a lot of attention from omnipotent powers for the rest of his life! Eek.
Terrific stuff. Really fascinating. And now the warning that something is going to drag them all into trouble. Dear oh dear. What could it be? And what of Adele and her mission ...
Author's Response:
Oh, Miranda Fave. I suspect you'll have to wait until I get around to writing a prequel to find out what happened with q the last time. Hehe. Maren has no tolerance left for him, though she tried for a while. Last time was the last straw. It would have made a good one for the Bad Penny challenge, actually, but I never finished writing it. Little q is a periodic annoyance in Icheb's life, for sure, though of course he always means well (or at least claims to!).
Poor Icheb definitely has his hands full what with the Q and his own personal issues and everything else. He's not at his best right now in so many ways, yet he's got this huge challenge to rise to, now with the added threat of Something Very Bad about to happen.
Date: 22 Sep 2009 03:37 Title: Chapter 25
Oh, my. This can't be good at all, but Q and Junior are always delightful "bad pennies". hehe! I can't wait!
Author's Response:
The incident referred to by Icheb in this chapter (in which Maren did NOT have a good time) would have been perfect for the "bad penny" challenge, and I even started to write it, but got distracted with trying to keep this story moving along. Indeed, Q is like a bad penny!
Date: 19 Sep 2009 23:05 Title: Chapter 25
Oh, yeah... if whatever's coming is bad enough to have caught the attention of the Continuum, it's going to be a toboggan-ride down into the bowels of Hell. Loved the Q/Junior/Icheb interaction, just the right amount of humor without going over the top. Well done. 
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.