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Reviewer: Gibraltar Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2009 18:26 Title: Rencorp
Author's Response: Well...half Augment, so to speak. His mother was. His father was not. He is extremely disturbed by what he heard at the meeting. (Who wouldn't be? Correction, what sane person wouldn't be?) This chapter gave me a ton of difficulty for several reasons, Johannsen's innate secretiveness the main one. I'm glad it worked for you. Thanks for the feedback!
Date: 07 Oct 2009 18:26 Title: Rencorp
Well, that explains Johannsen's aloofness. Not a sociopath, but an Augment. But even he is chilled to the bone by the recklessness of Rencorp's researchers who plan to toy with energies beyond their comprehension. Now he and Li are stuck in the middle, and if the Chairman's conversation with Wu is any indication, the worst is yet to come.
As expository scenes go, this one was crafted flawlessly and answered a great many questions, while simultaneously spawning a host of others.
Author's Response: Well...half Augment, so to speak. His mother was. His father was not. He is extremely disturbed by what he heard at the meeting. (Who wouldn't be? Correction, what sane person wouldn't be?) This chapter gave me a ton of difficulty for several reasons, Johannsen's innate secretiveness the main one. I'm glad it worked for you. Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: Mistral Signed 
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Date: 09 Sep 2009 08:55 Title: Rencorp
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2009 08:55 Title: Rencorp
So we have an Augment running around, eh? And some mad scientists, too. Where's Gary Seven when you need him?
Author's Response: Yes, yes indeed. I'm sure Mr. Seven is off handling a much worse crisis. The universe is full of them, you know!