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Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 21:57 Title: Chapter 13

“Getting-the-hell-out-of-here maneuver confirmed,” she said. I love some smart ass sass like that. Especially as you don't overdo it or have it coming out every other line as such would undoubtedly cause a break down of protocol and communication on a bridge. Rationing it out makes it all much more effective.

Likewise, it is refreshing to read your break neck battles and the pitch and flow of them flux so much. And of course, the media additions do actually lend to the proceedings. Very clever and very savvy.

And not the ending I expected for Arnit.

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