Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 20:30 Title: Chapter 6

So they've entered the nebula and to all intents and purposes things do not look good, even with Limis pulling her Maquis tricks the Jem'Hadar are on their trail. The question remains as to what is the ultimate aim of the Founders here and how will things pan out since Limis doesn't do the Starfleet thing and call in for support.

And again, it is worth pointing again that Ronnie's actions are very suspicious here. I'm surprised that Morrison is willing to go along with such counter orders given the Changeling possibility. Should he not at least bring his concern or the overriding of the captain's orders to the captain herself? I'm intrigued as to what Ronnie's motives are and indeed open to the possibility that you are trying to hoodwink us with a red herring.

But the set up here is such that I want to keep on reading and figure all of this out and see how Limis and crew manage whatever crisis is possibly headed their way.

Author's Response: Hey, MF, glad you're getting back to this story even if it has been a long while. Yes, it is a bit of a red herring given how the story has turned out. It may take a while to respond with these new reviews coming in at a fast pace.