Reviewer: Mistral Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2009 20:03 Title: Chapter 2

Something wicked this way comes...

You really portrayed Jake's emotions well. It felt real, y'know? Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks! I (vaguely, because I'm old as dirt) remember what it was like being a teen. Anger was so much easier to tap and deal with, and it was easier to lose oneself in fantasy than face up to a difficult reality or fear. I'm glad it rang true for you.