Date: 30 Jun 2013 21:10 Title: Chapter 10
I like how Adele handled that, including John's confession. I also liked John himself, and his sort of good-natured, professional and personal concern for Icheb, too. But man, the neural probe -- now that is particularly scary.
I'll be amazed if Maren O'Connor doesn't crack from the stress of this kind of thing. Icheb is stubborn to a fault, she's the only keeper of his secret, and she's also the Chief Engineer on a ship of 1500 people -- a position that weighs damn near as much as a captain's -- and on top of all of that, they're about to head off into the deep, dark unknown. Man, every chapter builds the tension. Well played, kes, well played.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 19:16 Title: Chapter 10
All very interesting and mysterious! Borg debri, subspace tears, the colony destroyed, and now Icheb was probed. He's obviously got a friend in John, and its funny how a person's best friend always seems to be the person they clash with the most. I can't help but wonder if Icheb's condition might have something in connection with his "prognosis", and that is why he wants to talk to Maren personally about what happened. This is,without a doubt, one of my favorite stories. ;D
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, KM13! I'm so glad you're continuing to enjoy the story. You'll get answers as you keep going ... don't want to spoil it for you. ;-) Thanks again for reviewing, and for the very kind compliment!
Date: 18 Aug 2009 03:15 Title: Chapter 10
Whoops-looks like John jumped the gun and now could pay the price. Great convo between him and Icheb.