Date: 30 Jun 2013 04:15 Title: Chapter 8
Oh, the bane of bio-neural gel packs. I don't blame Maren, at all. But the reveal on what might just be wrong with them? Sheer genius. I love Irina's incredulous reply about someone mind-raping the computer. Absolutely brilliant, and I definitely continue to like her. I also love that Bashir was awkward and full of himself, before; it's oddly annoying and endearing, all at once.
Fascinating. And really, excellent writing, too. As a side note, I like your chapter lengths. They definitely keep the pace going.
Date: 08 Apr 2012 23:21 Title: Chapter 8
Ha ha ha! 'mind-rape the ship's computers'!!! That is insane! I laughed so hard at this I cried! Now that is original humour! Plus you've also won over this 9er's heart with introducing Bashir!
Author's Response: You are the third person to tell me he/she cried reading this story, but the first to have done so from laughing. ;-) Glad you liked!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 00:29 Title: Chapter 8
“Are you suggesting someone tried to mind-rape the ship’s computers?” Love that line.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. Thanks for the feedback!
Date: 26 Oct 2009 03:19 Title: Chapter 8
Jules is back in town, eh? Excellent!
Date: 18 Aug 2009 03:00 Title: Chapter 8
HA! Bashir is the CMO! Great stuff-I always liked his character.