Terrific stuff Anna again. The writing is very tight and I get the impression that you deliberate over every phrase and word carefully. Everything is for effect and drives either the story or the emotion of the characters. Very well done. I'm really envious with the skill and that's no mere words of flattery. All of the emotional rollercoaster going on and a mystery mixed up with it and some terrific moments of humour too - Spock around the table in the canteen was one moment after another. Very deflty handled and well written.