Date: 15 Jul 2009 21:43 Title: One
I'm sticking around for it Anna. So don't try to scare me away. LOL. And I want to keep reading. Love your style and how you hook into the characters.
Author's Response: You're just bad. :D Just remember that I warned you, okay? I did my very best, I honestly did. It's girl-style writing. Beware!
Date: 09 Jul 2009 17:38 Title: One
I am a sucker for mystery and intrigue and, just as Miranda Fave said, you have set up really well. I even like the name of the aliens; Legourians!!! Why are they hiding? What’s going on??
Kirk/Spock, in TOS stories, have to be up there in front. For me they drive TOS, and you are doing a good job there as well. Keep it up!!! And keep that intrigue ever so ‘there’.
Author's Response: I shall do my best, sir. :D Thank you. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2009 17:37 Title: One
I adored Kirk's slight jealousy when it comes to that other captain. ;) And it's nice to hear about familiar faces from the show (Bob Wesley)! *grin* Loved the M-5 reference. I also enjoyed the fact that Kirk didn't want to stay with that woman because she was too much of a fangirl. Very mature IMO. Liked this a lot.
And - oh my!!! Assassination?! Spock would never do that! Whoa!!! Now that's a real mystery here!
Love your stories, as always! :)
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you very much! Yeah, well, Kirk and mature do meet in the same sentence every once in a while. ;-) Glad you liked it. :)
Date: 08 Jul 2009 23:08 Title: One
Oh BLOODY Heck! Poor Spock. He's in a right pickle. Obviously, something very dubious going on but just what remains to be seen. There seems to be quite a mystery to the Legourians and I am intrigued to discover what lies beneath their hidden selves. Why hide away if there's nothing to hide?
As for the characterisation - of course sublime, tight writing. Loved the internal sights from Kirk. How he puzzles over his own train of thoughts, his jealousy about Spock and Scotty around this other captain [and what's the deal with him? hmm ...], his being unsure of his footing around Spock and their games of chess. You build a very intricate relationship dynamic between Kirk and Spock but the entire crew too, with Uhura and others commenting on Spock ad Scotty going shopping and as always putting the ship first.
Author's Response: Thanks! LOL, MF, I'm willing to bet no one write reviews quite the way you do. ;-) Thank you for trying this one, it might have more action than I usually put in. :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2009 21:44 Title: One
Dear Anna,
As always, your characters are just perfect. Blessed Scotty, a good officer and a good man. Uhura... is Uhura! LOL
Your OCs, a delight to read. Luca, from E the O, Kerr, the new aid.
And the plot is really entertaining.
Waiting for more...
V.
Author's Response: Thanks, Vero. ;-) And yes, Uhura is Uhura, and Scotty's a good man. :D