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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2023 01:04 Title: Epilogue - Ground State: 3

You have the makings of a unique non-Trek original series here in which humans rarely appear, but have outsized influence because of their proximity and Lif's history serving in their FTL military service.

One thing all of us would like to find is a profit center - well... here it is... Of course CeeJay fans would recognize Lif as a UT character and the Krellonian Empire as part of the expanded Trekverse - but you can completely avoid Trek trademarks and copyrights, get an agent and market such a book. And you've already written quite a few chapters in it.

Garla is definitely one of my favorite original characters - with the emphasis on original. And her final message is a satisfying wrap for her character. But it could be the jumping off point for several stories about her.

Thanks!! rbs



Author's Response: Hey thanks for the kind words. I've played around with the idea of writing original sci-fi before. Barely Human is another story were you could easily strip out the Trek and market it as an non media tie-in original. And sure, there's a bit of a temptation there, but in the end, I'm not really that much of an author, just a guy who really enjoys spending time in my interpretation of the Star Trek universe, and following these sets of characters.

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