Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2022 01:53 Title: Part 8 - Decoherence: 1

You have developed a new wrinkle in the fine art of the cliffhanger - the cascading cliffhanger...

Nice - now we get a do-over with the gruesome death of Tyrantus (and I'm sort of rooting for an even more gruesome end to RoboOwens - the last one was just so gratifyingly visceral.) 

I'm almost hoping we get a third do-over with Michael holding a checklist... Avoid zombie Zeischt - check; hit the dark matter thingie to skip around the Inth - check; nose down under the comet - check... It would totally add a Dr. Who edge to the adventure.

Quite enjoying the fireworks - Thanks!! rbs

Author's Response: Hmm, you've given me something to think about. Although I'm thinking that perhaps we're reaching the limits of the amount of fireworks I can build into this very long story.