Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2022 23:06 Title: Part 4 - Roundabout Route: 2

Tazla's showing some leadership chops that Xylion has yet to develop. Typical vulcan - follow the rules and logic be damned...

Really liking the drive in this chapter - it pulls the reader along through Tazla's POV. Definitely an agressive, take-charge character. Not easily kept down.

Thanks!! rbs

Author's Response: The mark of a good leader is that they don't like when they are sidelined, forced to watch as others take action. Although there may be some other reasons for Tazla's anxiety here as well.