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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2022 19:37 Title: Chapter 10

Well that's a bundle of news... Here's hoping Rameriz doesn't relapse into her baroness alter-ego. Very much liking Izawa's character as you reveal him, one decision at a time. Old characters are fun to write, given the layers of experience and richness of learning over such time.

Really nice job with both Cybal's and Rameriz's grief - well emoted.

Thanks!! rbs

 

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