
Date: 20 Oct 2021 10:03 Title: Chapter 1
Overall a very cinematic feel. Reads a bit like a Tom Clancy novel - it would make a great blockbuster ST movie - especially with the detailed descriptions of locations and combat. Very easy to visualize - with some great visuals. Quite visceral as well.
Thanks!! rbs
Author's Response:
I'm pleased you enjoyed the tale. I'd envisioned this story for years, and only just got around to finally writing it. Thank you for all your reviews!

Date: 28 Sep 2021 20:55 Title: Chapter 1
Ah - the origin story. I like the diversity among the old guard leadership.
I'm wondering if you wrote this story first or if it was a later writing to fill out the backstory for the Sandhurst Lar'ragos relationship. Fun introduction - Pava is kindof a creepy dude.
Thanks!! rbs
Author's Response:
This was a much later tale, an exploration of how Pava and Donald first met. Thanks for the review.