Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2021 16:15 Title: Part 2 - Shattered: 43

Those good old transporters... At least they were able to save one of the Stars. But not the falling Star...

A fitting end for Dark Michael and Dark Star - although surprising that she didn't try to avoid him. At least she went out in a blaze of glory.

Always interesting to see what alternate circumstances might make of individuals.

Nice, tightly written action sequence.

Thanks!! rbs

Author's Response: Thanks. Admittedly, not one of my subtlest chapters. Battle to the death on a volcanic planet suffering from earthquakes. But hey, it was kinda fun. Probably not for Star. Either one.