Reviewer: CeJay Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2021 20:16 Title: Episode 25.2: I Dream of Shiva - Come Fly With Me

A little heavy on the exposition here but Grorher certainly is a real life hero. Most certainly a most excellent get for Hunter. Although the fact that he wants to be just like those lawyers is worrisome. Nobody should ever want to be a lawyer ...

Author's Response:

That's some quite valuable feedback - I do need to lean out and restructure the dialogue a little to make it feel more natural.

Grorher is a creature of the Dominion, so the idea of legal rights is rather novel for him..

Thanks!! rbs