Date: 28 May 2013 15:29 Title: Chapter 25
Not much to say except there is some serious character development going on and it is good stuff. But, and this may sound whiny on my part, are you going to keep leaving us in the dark about Hank? And why doesn't that Romulan vessel commanded by these aliens, the enemy as Mark calls them, finish off the Pearl?
Date: 13 Nov 2009 22:03 Title: Chapter 25
Again, the introspection of the characters is impressive for the fact it doesn't seem to bog down the story. I like seeing the differeing reactions to the crisis and unfolding calamity. From docs leaving the service, to sweeping helmsmen and brooding tactical officers. It all is very good. But the very suspicious nature of me has a very sneaky suspicion about something. namely our deck thirteen survivors. Maybe the tragedy of the story and events is swaying a little at the end but I sort of thought they might be 'impersonators' [No? Maybe?]
Author's Response:
You sir have just revealed what could have been-I had strongly thought about making one of the deck 13 dead or survivors an imposter, but I came across a better solution.
Said solution is revealed in Book II-so you'll just have to keep reading till then. :)