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Reviewer: Ln X Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2013 15:01 Title: Chapter 23

A chapter from the perspective of two messed up people; one of Bethany and Chris. The funny thing is they same the same theme; they face losing a person very dear to him yet Chris knows he loves (though I forget her name) her while Bethany is probably this way because of her hidden love of Hank. So that is a nice contrast there.

Reviewer: Miranda Fave Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2009 21:22 Title: Chapter 23

I like how you are handling the crisis and prolonging the coming to grips with the situation. Makes it all the more real to read and feel for the characters. And I particularly liked this little flashback scene we got. It was nicely judged in its placement.

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