Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2021 14:01 Title: Part 2 - Shattered: 27

Interesting storytelling technique through clairvoyance - a rather difficult trick. 

Very interesting that, at least from Nora's POV, the aliens seem to be targeting her. Either she is somehow a lynchpin or perhaps the weak link in the group trying to defy the clicky-aliens. 

And Garla was their point of contact for obtaining supplies. That was hinted in an earlier chapter, but the importance of it didn't come through until called back in this one.

Very twisty little plot - and kudos for working Gary Seven into it. Robert Lansing had a great career, but I would very much have liked to see him take that lead role.

Thanks!! rbs

Author's Response: This story has given me the opportunity to try something a little different as far as storytelling is confirmed on occasions. I wanted things to flow a little less linear and more chaotic. Not quite stream of consciousness but certainly something to highlight the fact that a lot of this stuff is happening in people's minds.