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Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 16:17 Title: Part 1 - Splintered: 18

I'm very much a fan of process stories - such as a rough ride through turbulant space. This one has the virtue of not only moving the story forward, but enriching it both with character development and cultural development (destruction of the freighter). 

Many authors are in a hurry to just get to the next location and move the plot forward instead of giving a realistic feel to the story.

Thanks!! rbs

Reviewer: Robert Bruce Scott Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 16:14 Title: Part 1 - Splintered: 18

Spellchecker chew: Pp beginning "How confident are we..." I think you meant "weather" instead of "whether"

Thanks! rbs

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